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I dance in clown shoes.

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April 5, 2005
I dance in clown shoes. by *zephyrkinetic *zephyrkinetic's piece about an argument he had with an ex-girlfriend is hilarious. Casting himself in the clown role of the title, he's completly dumbfounded by the rhythm and complexity of words dancing from his partners mouth.
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You compose your conversations.
Fitfully gesturing with whatever you hold,
ending arguments with a flourish.
Make a point, now whirl, quickly.
Make it impossible to counter with your unpunctuation.
You duck and weave, spin, sidestep, pirouette:
One, two, one, two, faster, harder, stronger.
You leave me confused and two steps back,
just far enough behind to appear lost and unsure.
And if I catch up, if I make a point,
you spin again, a trail of words falling like pixie dust
as you make your escape.
And as you storm out, you slam the period behind you,
Ending your sentence with a door.
And I must follow you, my thuds down the stairs preceding my statement,
trying to catch up before the page break.
Now I capitalize a W, and follow with an a, i, t.
And you pause, spin, speak, gesture, spin, continue.
A waltz to counter my four-four.

You don't dance your words-
you speak a dance.
You speak a dance Baryshnikov couldn't follow.
You rapidly reverse the rhythm,
changing tempo in a blur of sound,
conducting your opus with hands to match.
Then, as you end your symphony, you bow.
You bow your head, turn on the car, and drive away.
And my two left feet shuffle me back inside,
your concert still ringing in my ears.
A piece about an argument I had with an ex-girlfriend.
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Edited: Replaced "haphazardly" with "Fitfully." Corrected spelling on "rhythm"

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Ichors's avatar
Although from the title I thought the narrative would concentrate more on your clumsiness rather than your ex's eloquence, this does not hinder my will to favourite.